Elvish Writer

OK, so in the summary when i say "Genoar keeps pushing his son to fight, but when he puts his son in danger, Deloi has to reveal her inner animal to rescue him." Deloi and Anner are two elves with the rarest gift. They are shapeshifters and their animal is DRAGONS! :D They both keep this a secret, because if anyone knew besides their close family, and in Anners case no one, then they would risk being taken advantage of. Both of my main characters are considered the strongest among their people because of their capacity for magic. They can do pieces of magic that would kill any lesser magician/elf. Later in the book you will see Deloi put under amazing pressure, emotional and morally. So when Anner is in danger, Deloi finds the only way to reach him, and to help him, would be to shapeshift and fly to him on the tallest of the Vagarns'. I am currently working on drawing a map to help readers understand the book better when there reading it, and to understand the distance...

Hi Julie, Great choice of themes for your blog. The theme of your story has potential. Fantasy writing has a good following of readers. Before commenting, I am curious as to what kind of feedback are you looking for. There is a lot of help to be gained from the comments of others but remember that this is your story. Let the ideas inspire you but always write for yourself. Namaste ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you. The feedback i am looking for includes: ~Constructive Critisism ~Help Editing ~possible plot points i have not thought of yet for consideration. ~info about getting published ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dale Rogers said... Hello, I also am a new blogger. I would love to give you feed back in response you give me feedback. I feel we are both in the same boat, lots to write but need constuctive feedback. On my blog I post sample writings and infor about writing, its a journal of a sort, so stop by. Dale Rogers said... Also this is a good story line. I like the ideas bubbling around in...

It was a mildly chilly day. Mist hugged the ground and trees covering the paths. The trees were so close together in the forest that even with the sun at noon, little light got through the thick leaves. The forest had a large mountain range called the Vagarns'. There was also a very large clearing in the heart of the forest where the capital of Astra, Lestor, sat housing the royal Evarg family and some of the oldest and greatest metal workers ever known The forest is ringing with the sounds of war, hammers on metal and chain mail clinking, the ground thudding with feet preparing to march. Illaden, the current queen of all elves, had just received a missive from her daughter at the front. Dear wise queen and Mother, We have defeated three of five flanks of Ludoa’s Calvary, the last two flanks protecting their general from us. Many of our men are a little weak from their use of magic. We have won today, and we are hoping to get your blessing in attacking them again to finish them off...

Elven Problems Love thou Enemy A civil war in the elven territory of Norhan rips the moderate sized country in two. With the last two royal houses of Ludoa and Evarg going their separate ways as each gather loyal people for their cause. With the country split between the Ludoan east and Evargan east. Tensions are running high. Genoar is content to let his son Anner to follow his command. He soon feels threatened by Illadens general, whom is also her daughter, Deloi who had more magic than half his army. What really worried him is that he feared that she may be able to rival himself, and his cause. But what the Queen Illaden, and the self imposed king do not know is that neither shall make much head way in this war; for Anner and Deloi meet for the first time ever on the eve of the battle for Moonleigh city and fields. When ever they met, they both knew that they would never be the same again. Genoar keeps pushing his son to fight, but when he puts his son in danger, Deloi has to reveal...

Ok, so this blog will be focusing on my book and getting advice, and constructive critisism from bloggers like your self. Once I get my blog to where i want it, i will start posting portions of the begining chapters . So have fun reading and hope we can be friends! :D